Secret Bliss

,

gold stars and chilled breezes
circle our embrace

we’re cozy,
discreet
deep in
enchanted darkness and
mammoth trees

our hands refuse unlocking
pouting lips spill special requests
mumbles
whispers

β€œOne more kiss…”

we dive in
savoring
unlocking…

departing

Back to our private lives
in separate beds
where a different head
rests

I lie here,
as you do there,
dreaming of our next
meeting, deep inside
gold
starry bliss…

Featured Image: Team GHB

Conversation

  1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    What a beautiful and enthralling poem.
    Beautifully expressed, with adorable emotions.
    A great share πŸŒ·β˜ƒοΈ

    1. Kirsten

      Good day! πŸ˜‡ Thank you, Devang. I’m pleased you like it.

      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        I love it actually 🌞
        My day is almost over. It’s almost 7:30 pm here.
        But I hope a pleasant day for you with less stress and more smile.

      2. Kirsten

        Thank you. I appreciate it! Once my spells take effect, all should be well and settled in my life.

        Jk! πŸ˜„

      3. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Things are unsettled atm? πŸ™‚

      4. Kirsten

        Life always is. I’ll be fine, though. 😎

      5. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Yes you will!!
        Ghost human bones has to be alright .
        Keep shining buddy.
        Sending you some uncontrollable positivity. 🌟

  2. GraceoftheSun

    Wonderful piece, Kirsten. Beautifully expressed.πŸ’•

    1. Kirsten

      I’m happy you enjoyed it. πŸ’• 😊 Thank you so much, Grace!

      1. GraceoftheSun

        I sure did. My pleasure πŸ’•

      2. Kirsten

        πŸ’•

  3. Knukkls

    Hmmm, what a terrible person… but a great poem! Made me angry 😠 Good job, lol!

    1. Kirsten

      πŸ˜„ understandable feelings. I’d feel the same if I were the ‘different head’.

  4. Pooja G

    Loved the poem although at the end I was like “oh no!”

    1. Kirsten

      Haha! I know right? Sneaky, sneaky. 🫣

      1. Pooja G

        😜

  5. Mike U.

    You’re so adept at weaving a magical adventure in so few words, Kirsten. And that twist at the end (the “different head”)? I was like, “Ah, man…!” “Secret” bliss is right. πŸ˜€ Well done, my friend. πŸ™‚

    1. Kirsten

      Aww, thank you so much, Mike! I appreciate you. πŸ’•πŸ™
      Haha I love twists! πŸ˜‰

  6. Athira

    Beautiful Kirsten..Great work!

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you kindly! 😊

      1. Athira

        Always welcome

  7. James Mose

    Wonderful art Kirsten.

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you so much, James. I appreciate you reading! I hope you have a Merry Christmas and happy new year my friend. πŸŒŸπŸŽ„

      1. James Mose

        Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

  8. Jeff Flesch

    Beautiful words, Kirsten. πŸ’žπŸ₯° Wishing you a wonderful new year! πŸŽ‰πŸ₯³

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you so much, Jeff! πŸ₯°πŸ’ž I hope you have a wonderful new year as well, my friend. Both peaceful and full of greatness. πŸ₯³πŸŽ‰

      1. Jeff Flesch

        You’re most welcome, Kirsten! πŸ’žπŸ₯° Always. Thank you so much, my friend! 🎊πŸ₯³

      2. Kirsten

        πŸŽ‰πŸ’•

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