Secret Bliss

,

gold stars and chilled breezes
circle our embrace

we’re cozy,
discreet
deep in
enchanted darkness and
mammoth trees

our hands refuse unlocking
pouting lips spill special requests
mumbles
whispers

“One more kiss…”

we dive in
savoring
unlocking…

departing

Back to our private lives
in separate beds
where a different head
rests

I lie here,
as you do there,
dreaming of our next
meeting, deep inside
gold
starry bliss…

Featured Image: Team GHB

Conversation

  1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    What a beautiful and enthralling poem.
    Beautifully expressed, with adorable emotions.
    A great share 🌷☃️

    1. Kirsten

      Good day! 😇 Thank you, Devang. I’m pleased you like it.

      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        I love it actually 🌞
        My day is almost over. It’s almost 7:30 pm here.
        But I hope a pleasant day for you with less stress and more smile.

      2. Kirsten

        Thank you. I appreciate it! Once my spells take effect, all should be well and settled in my life.

        Jk! 😄

      3. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Things are unsettled atm? 🙂

      4. Kirsten

        Life always is. I’ll be fine, though. 😎

      5. DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Yes you will!!
        Ghost human bones has to be alright .
        Keep shining buddy.
        Sending you some uncontrollable positivity. 🌟

  2. GraceoftheSun

    Wonderful piece, Kirsten. Beautifully expressed.💕

    1. Kirsten

      I’m happy you enjoyed it. 💕 😊 Thank you so much, Grace!

      1. GraceoftheSun

        I sure did. My pleasure 💕

      2. Kirsten

        💕

  3. Knukkls

    Hmmm, what a terrible person… but a great poem! Made me angry 😠 Good job, lol!

    1. Kirsten

      😄 understandable feelings. I’d feel the same if I were the ‘different head’.

  4. Pooja G

    Loved the poem although at the end I was like “oh no!”

    1. Kirsten

      Haha! I know right? Sneaky, sneaky. 🫣

      1. Pooja G

        😜

  5. Mike U.

    You’re so adept at weaving a magical adventure in so few words, Kirsten. And that twist at the end (the “different head”)? I was like, “Ah, man…!” “Secret” bliss is right. 😀 Well done, my friend. 🙂

    1. Kirsten

      Aww, thank you so much, Mike! I appreciate you. 💕🙏
      Haha I love twists! 😉

  6. Athira

    Beautiful Kirsten..Great work!

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you kindly! 😊

      1. Athira

        Always welcome

  7. James Mose

    Wonderful art Kirsten.

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you so much, James. I appreciate you reading! I hope you have a Merry Christmas and happy new year my friend. 🌟🎄

      1. James Mose

        Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

  8. Jeff Flesch

    Beautiful words, Kirsten. 💞🥰 Wishing you a wonderful new year! 🎉🥳

    1. Kirsten

      Thank you so much, Jeff! 🥰💞 I hope you have a wonderful new year as well, my friend. Both peaceful and full of greatness. 🥳🎉

      1. Jeff Flesch

        You’re most welcome, Kirsten! 💞🥰 Always. Thank you so much, my friend! 🎊🥳

      2. Kirsten

        🎉💕

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