far away. time passes. . .
blood becomes water
family tree decays
Senryu could have multiple interpretation!!
I just love it
It’s interesting and beautifully written
Definitely! 🙂 Thank you kindly, Devang!
Thank you so much! 🙂
Unfortunately, blood is not always thicker than water. Sometimes family doesn’t act like family and friends take their place. Absolutely loved the poem!
Very true, it’s crazy how feelings can change in time. Thank you for checking this out! 🙂
Excellent play on the blood is thicker than water aphorism. Well done!
Thank you, my friend! 🤗 Much appreciated!
“…blood becomes water…” And sometimes, that water evaporates until there’s nothing left at all. This one resonates with me. So deep for such a short piece. Well done, Kirsten. 🙂
Ah, reminds me of faded memories. Sometimes that happens. 🍃
I’m happy you enjoyed it. Thank you Mike! I hope the weekend is treating you well. 💕
Hi. First of all thanks for reading me at Masticadores and Gobblers… I was checking out your poems and text and I thought about you sharing some at:
Read it when you can and just tell them that I invited you.
Congratulations, here is a good space to chill
You’re welcome, Miriam! Thank you so much for reading and the info, I’ll check it out. 🙂
Powerful write Kirsten👏👏👏
Thank you kindly, Cindy! 🙂
You’re so very welcome! 😎
Gorgeous words, Kirsten. 🥰🤗
Thank you so much, Jeff! 🤗