far away. time passes. . . blood becomes water family tree decays
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Senryu could have multiple interpretation!!
I just love it
It’s interesting and beautifully written
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Definitely! 🙂 Thank you kindly, Devang!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Unfortunately, blood is not always thicker than water. Sometimes family doesn’t act like family and friends take their place. Absolutely loved the poem!
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Very true, it’s crazy how feelings can change in time. Thank you for checking this out! 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Excellent play on the blood is thicker than water aphorism. Well done!
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Thank you, my friend! 🤗 Much appreciated!
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“…blood becomes water…” And sometimes, that water evaporates until there’s nothing left at all. This one resonates with me. So deep for such a short piece. Well done, Kirsten. 🙂
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Ah, reminds me of faded memories. Sometimes that happens. 🍃
I’m happy you enjoyed it. Thank you Mike! I hope the weekend is treating you well. 💕
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Hi. First of all thanks for reading me at Masticadores and Gobblers… I was checking out your poems and text and I thought about you sharing some at:
https://hotelmasticadoreshouse.wordpress.com/home/Read it when you can and just tell them that I invited you.
Congratulations, here is a good space to chill-
You’re welcome, Miriam! Thank you so much for reading and the info, I’ll check it out. 🙂
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Powerful write Kirsten👏👏👏
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Thank you kindly, Cindy! 🙂
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You’re so very welcome! 🫶🫶😎
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Gorgeous words, Kirsten. 🥰🤗
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Thank you so much, Jeff! 🤗
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